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Our problem-solving approach

Every script is as distinctive as its writer. Instead of one-size-fits-all advice, we offer bespoke feedback tailored to your particular needs. We don’t just point out where your script needs work, but, where appropriate, work with you to come up with practical, creative solutions. For example:

  • Your characters’ motivations aren’t believable. We will identify where the false notes are and suggest alternatives.

  • Your script needs to be tighter. We will make sure you know what your story is really about so you can identify where cuts can be made.

  • Your dialogue doesn’t sound natural in places. We will point out where the awkward lines are so the character’s true voice can emerge.

  • Your interstitial writing sounds more like a memo. We will help you improve even the parts of your script that aren’t dialogue to keep the reader turning the page.

  • Your script is full of typos. We’ll correct them.

  • If there are any issues you are particularly concerned about, let us know and we’ll be sure to address them.

You may not always agree with our suggestions, but at least they will help you overcome blocks and stimulate new ideas. Together we can unlock the true potential of your script.

 
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"I really appreciate both your criticisms and your suggested fixes. For me, that is the most helpful feature of your approach. Even if I don't necessarily agree with all of them, your suggestions immediately sparked off different ideas."